This poem i wrote for a Habbo thing I am doing, But i would like your thoughts on it before I inculde it.
Revenge on Him.
He lied to me.
For that he'll regret.
I'll kill him, I will!
I promise. I bet.
But with my head up high.
My fists in rage.
I'll smack him, HIT HIM.
I'll fight, I'll engage.
I stand up tall.
High with might.
For he's the one.
That'll get the fright.
Love is Sweet.
Wine and Dine.
But revenge I'll get.
Revenge is mine.





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3 i cnt remeber if i repped you or not :s
