This poem i wrote for a Habbo thing I am doing, But i would like your thoughts on it before I inculde it.
Revenge on Him.
He lied to me.
For that he'll regret.
I'll kill him, I will!
I promise. I bet.
But with my head up high.
My fists in rage.
I'll smack him, HIT HIM.
I'll fight, I'll engage.
I stand up tall.
High with might.
For he's the one.
That'll get the fright.
Love is Sweet.
Wine and Dine.
But revenge I'll get.
Revenge is mine.
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Thread: Revenge on Him. [Poem]
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Revenge on Him. [Poem]
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Originally Posted by Woodrally
Originally Posted by thechoo
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oh my.. much violence... other than that lovely +rep
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Thankyou. :]
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Originally Posted by Woodrally
Originally Posted by thechoo
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10-09-2005, 02:17 PM #4
Great poem + Rep also
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10-09-2005, 02:18 PM #5
Edit: Double posted :S
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Thankyou
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Originally Posted by Woodrally
Originally Posted by thechoo
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I like it
Loving the 'Wine and Dine.But revenge I'll get.Revenge is mine.'
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DanROOTY!
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Thanks
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Originally Posted by Woodrally
Originally Posted by thechoo
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Wow i like that
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ROFL!!!!!!!!!!
3 i cnt remeber if i repped you or not :s
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