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    Default Cracked Love - Chapter Two

    Prepare for the second installement of the book!.. Here is a list of when the next chapters will be available..

    Chapter Three - Tuesday November 1 2005
    Chapter Four - Friday November 4 2005
    Chapter Five - Monday November 7 2005

    Practicly every three days.. Altogether there are 12 chapters..


    Cracked Love
    Chapter Two - Rushed Feelings


    Why didnt I stay? Why? I could of made a go of me and Emily. God I have gotta be more confident I thought rushing back to my house to relax. While I was running by, my friends were by the oak tree calling me over. I didnt really care about them. I just wanted to get home and just let all my stress out.

    The day passed with me just relaxing and chilling on a beautiful Sunday afternoon. Before I knew it, Monday morning arose and yet again. Time for for school. First of all I had Science and I sat near Emily so maybe I could get a glimpse of her. Maybe she would say anything.

    " Right take your seats class! " Mrs Cortch Said. While I was doing that, Emily was staring at me. I thought she was just messing as a joke from one of her friends.
    " Heya Tom, wanna hang with us tonight then? " She asked
    " Uhh I donno " I replied confused
    " Where did you go yesterday? You just ran off " She asked curiously
    " Urm.. Had to go home " I replied unsure. Thank god that worked. She asked me to go with her tonight to hang out. Should I go? what about her friends? What will they do to me?

    What could they possibley do to me with Emily there? Was this all a joke?

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    It's pretty boring to be honest, you've made it too short and quick, everything happens at once. Pfft try harder next time

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    Si, Mabye you should make it longer

    But enywayz 7/10

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