Erm, Ideas/CC are needed, alot. I don't want ratings as they don't help.

Erm, Ideas/CC are needed, alot. I don't want ratings as they don't help.
The long bit coming out from the water/submarine could be an air strip?
C+C. Its very good overall so far, but do what I said above ^^
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Yeah, thats why I made it, just couldn't get the bloody plane right >=[
Make the like random white lines to show it is a runway first, and some people with those glowy things in their hands *doesn't know what they're called*
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Mabey Stick some cars on it?
Problem with the people is that due to the scale, the people are 2 pixels tall, so you can't add detail to them, but the white lines are a plan.Originally Posted by Seadog
Make the like random white lines to show it is a runway first, and some people with those glowy things in their hands *doesn't know what they're called*
Woah, its grown a lot... umm.
Make a truck getting searched ?
Helipad ?
Stuff like that
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I like the water =)
but why is the ship black inlined? because you don't do that anywhere else.
edit: so is the little wall around the grey little square.
shading is pretty basic, add some texture
You change your center to often.
You don't stick to the patern, you just place buildings where you like them.
The crane ,well it looks bad.
The platform on the ship looks weird.. to thin.
Overall, allot of pixel errors. You wanted constructive critisme, well here you have it :p
Cheers dude, someone has already pointed out the ship outline on a different thread which I'll probably do towards the end. I had difficulties making the crane but i've just seen some ideas which I'll probably add. The building alignment and center line are petty things which I didn't notice but will change and I'll add texture when Im finished.
enhance ship outline with deeper borders and fix those pixel errors
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