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  1. 19-03-2006, 02:21 PM #1
    TheUnknownPoet
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    Default [First Thread] Who Am I?

    Seing as i helped to create this forum aswell as the marvelous staff of habbox, it would be an honour to introduce its first ever poem =]


    Who am I?

    Who am I to disagree?
    To a false sense of immortality
    How can you be kind?
    How can you be sweet?
    When every time I see you
    I fall down to your feet.

    Who am I to pick a fight?
    With someone who is probably right?
    Why are you here?
    Why are you even trying?
    When every time I see you
    I always know your lieing

    Who am I to make fun of you?
    When the things you say are pretty true?
    Who are you with?
    Who holds you tight?
    When did I realise
    That something wasn’t right?

    Who am I to call you names
    When I am the one who plays your games?
    What are you doing here?
    What are you accomplishing?
    When will you let me off?
    This puppet transforming string

    Who am I to understand?
    What is going through your head
    Your sins will not be forgotten
    For, I am already dead.
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  2. 19-03-2006, 02:40 PM #2
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    Dude that rocked, I love poems whre you have to read between the lines
    MERRY CHRISTMAS!
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  3. 19-03-2006, 02:43 PM #3
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    lol
    yeh
    ps. you know me ;]
    but i will not reveal myself to you yet
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  4. 19-03-2006, 02:47 PM #4
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    That was excellent , I've never been a poetry person.. but that was good x] .
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  5. 19-03-2006, 02:47 PM #5
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    Posts in the new subforum of my forums .

    Very nice poem
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  6. 19-03-2006, 03:00 PM #6
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    why thankyou chilloutrich =]
    and thankyou fullyinsane, for your rep ^^ very appreciated.
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  7. 19-03-2006, 03:23 PM #7
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    Very good. I'm not really into poetry that much, nor am I good at writing poems, but this was very good.

    Who are you? If people know you I'd rep you on your account which you are known on. ;)
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  8. 19-03-2006, 03:28 PM #8
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    lol
    people do know me
    they know my account
    they just dont know im associated with that account =]
    besides, i was banned lol.
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  9. 24-03-2006, 06:28 PM #9
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    I envy u ur so good and poetry

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