Nelly's Hosting Layout - 3rd Try

[Flauvo]

Right, no more mr.nelly guy!

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*Wait's joes criticism*

CC Rate outta 10

[Rob]

Better, looks more hosting-like. But some of the stuff is a bit big. And use other colours aswell as just the grey on the content bit. Add some gradients.

Rob

[Flauvo]

As i sed, im horrible with experimenting cus' they always go wrong.

I played it safe with 2 colours again basically.

I think it looks ok

All perfectly aligned and spaced

[DMB-Hosting]

W00t much better i think 9/10

[SimplyTech]

Nice 9/10 ill call joe on M s n

[Flauvo]

Lol, i await his anology

[nelly]

Joe said he will look later!

[JoeComins]

OK. So I am in the mood!

1.The background is too light in comparison to the layout main bit, and on a full page, the scanlines would be overpowering and unprofessional!
2. Wheres your identity? Your Logo. Your sign. SOmething that says to me CONNECT HOSTING without words?
3. PInk scanline with a lightcast? Different, and rather nice, althought not very professional"
4. The text of Package 1,2,3 and the navigation arew way too big
5. Im not a fan of horizontal navigations, but this one is worse! If you are to use a HNav, then they need to either be text, or the buttons to be divided and ordered very neatly!
6. The white text on grey really aint pressing my buttons. Its OK, but the grey should be darker for white, and lighter for black!
7. The pakcages etc need an image maybe, and some text with some light blending options!
8. You need a logo, with parts of it used al over the site. It makes people remember it, and rememebr CONNECT HSOTING
9. Pages would be hard to add due to your horrible naigation
10. You need more variation.

7/10
Nice, just not got there yet!

A little harsh in reflection from my current mood.

Still alot lot better though!

WOO FOR CRITICALLITY?

[Lukeh]

I like it.. I mean its very simply but its better than what I could do so I cant really criticize

I like the touch of pink too..

7/10

[ebay]

pretty good but still a bit basic- 8/10, +rep for making 1 like 4 times