WIP Layout - 40%

[JoeComins]

I am going to make a webdesign site, whatever people say!

This is what I've got so far. Its OK. Not great at the minute. I have loads and loads to add. I havnt even finished the background yet!

Going to bed so I thought I'd get some comments for tomorrow afternoon.

Please note, this is only about 40 minutes work. perfectly aligned, many subtle blending options, etc.

[IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/ebbb8c4a2c.gif[/IMG]

No people saying, 10/10 - I love it, or 0/10 Crap

I want proper critism and addice

Thanks

Joe Comins

[King-Jark]

looks allright. i think it would look much better if you didnt turn the rose black. Also for an idea as a background, put a lace type texture that matches the rose.

very nice though

[Mentor]

If your gona make a webdesign sites your gona need something more than a basic looking, badly designed peace like that "/
Design for functonaty, not just look, else despite how nice the graphics are, the site itself will be **** "/

At the moment it just looks like a more monotone version of the layout a million or so blogs are useing.

Branding is the key to busness, so logos are VERY important. My own look ****, but look at most succeful sites, Obvios branding "/ you could never miss the Google logo.


Alothogh according to the stats its in its very early stadges, so there may be some big improvments to come, But you ask for the criticisms by posting early "/ At the moment thats possibly one of the worst layouts youve done "/

[Slixor]

the box on the left if thats a navagation the boxes are too big, also the lines on the boxes look to sharp. also where the rose is in the content box at the top and bottem pic there is a pixel error on the left. as the other guy said, it looks like a blog.

[\\Tom]

I hate it, no offence.

[y2kt]

In my opinion, black and white layouts like yours look too plain. It would look better if you had the layout in black and white, but something in colour, like the flower or something, which stands out from the rest of the layout.

[JoeComins]

OK - Not up to my usall low standard.

Ill edit it now

Carl: What blog is that?

I was looking around last night, and made it from looking at another site

[JoeComins]

OLD ONE:
[IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/ebbb8c4a2c.gif[/IMG]

NEW ONE:
[IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/58595923f7.gif[/IMG]

[Liberation]

Ye, 2nd one looks alot nice as its stand out with more colour etc, Cant wait for the end product

[y2kt]

Big improvement