Chocobos Manor - New

[Chocobos]

This was done by scratch, no C+P so hopefully it will be better, im quite happy with how the trees turned out... look better than the ones on UK Hotel view.



Clouds and cars may look wonky but they are hard to do.

/10? and C&C.

Uhm It's okay...

@ your signature:
You've said you gonna leave 2 times already. if you gonna leave, then get on with it.

[Chocobos]

Thanks i guess.

ps. last time i quitted habbox for 2 months atleast until my friend got me back into habbox by using the rare value site, and answer me why you closed your RPG already because lGoldBar has a 24 hour ban so i can't message you.

Read your other thread. I said it there.

[Fly-boy]

No offence but your quite sad if your gonan leave over some little internet dispute.

[Elliott$]

Looks a bit plain tbh =[

+rep anyway

[Chocobos]

Fly-Boy i don't like being disliked by people, why be on a forum if your going to be disliked by everyone?

Anyway back on topic...

to the alt.

Elliot ty for the rep, your rep power is high because my rep shot up oO
ps. i posted on your minicity :] and ill try to make my alts less plain in future.

[Fly-boy]

the alt is good. but why is the helipad so good?

6/10

[brodeo]

It looks very similar to your first alt. And the trees and door in comparison to the cars are huge.

[Stickie]

this already looks a bit better, smaller building and at least got some windows in it. but look at the proportions tho (I think that's how u say it in english anyway) if your tree's that big then ur car gotta be that big and windows that big etc... to me, the windows look a bit too small, also if you want it more realistic I'd put in more windows, look at the original habbo hotel, how many windows are there? also if you want a helipad on the roof, make sure people can go on to the roof (add a lil building with door in it on roof). alsod you used bright colors again with the sky, it's a bit too bright imho. the grass looks better tho. I'd work on the cars and mainly on the building aswell, for the car, just look how a car looks like and make it as a square to start with, then if u like u can make the edges smoother. for the rest it's just pixel errors, like u accidently drew a line on the right side of the building in a lighter color. and the windows have a pixel error at the middle and on the left side of the building on the sidewalk. oh and also with the sidewalk, it isnt at the same lvl as the normal road so try highering the sidewalk with just a simple line. same for the thing on the roof btw. I'm not gonna rate you on your alts yet cuz you wouldnt like it, but build up from comment and also read my last post on ur other alt.