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    Default Failed algerian entry

    Just wondered what you guys think I could have done to improve these rooms:



    That room linked to this one:



    Thanks in advance

    (it had a cheesey storyline going through it too, which is why bonnie blonde is there) o.0
    Last edited by KHK; 12-09-2006 at 02:14 PM.

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    First room: One one side with all the lodge looks very detailed but the other side looks quite plain. Although there is a petal floor and seating it might have been an idea to put more candles/dragons etc. in the middle of the floor to balance it out with the rest of the room. Some of it is a little mismatch.

    Second room: I'm not sure the petal floor goes very well with the rest of the room tbh. Red rugs maybe some more posters, and other red furni eg. candles, rugs etc.

    I like the first room better I must say, good effort though. + rep for trying
    Last edited by :Hazel; 12-09-2006 at 02:12 PM.
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    Thank you +rep

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    I think the first room is quite good Not sure about the second one how it has to do with a country but I think It'd make a good Love room

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