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    http://i11.tinypic.com/43hu1jn.png
    This is something I have been working on. I used windows from some old alterations of mine and added some new ones. The road barrier was made by Habbo not me. I hope you like it. I made some custom Habbos and furni for it. c+c please. It's like a country house for a rich person, hence the guards..
    Last edited by wewt; 04-11-2006 at 01:20 PM.

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    wow! That is really good so far!
    9/10! +rep
    What did you use to make it?
    Last edited by Starburst..x; 04-11-2006 at 01:27 PM.

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    Microsoft Paint.

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    Wondeful.
    10/10 +REP.
    Do you want Pie?

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    First off, I'd just like to say that I love the alt, which is why I have bothered to go into such detail. Don't think I'm having a go, I'm just trying to lend a hand to improve, and give my opinion. There are several things which I'd like to comment on, so I edited the pic to make it a bit easier for you to see what I'm saying.
    [IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/a31df39625.png[/IMG]
    1. The rooftop is fairly plain. I love the pavement flooring effect, but maybe try making a rooftop garden?. Also, the benches look just a tad too big for Habbo, and the decor on them is fairly plain.
    2. Nothing major, but the lead isn't really plugging into anything. Perhaps try making a socket?
    3. I love the way you have made the image pailer for the windows, but there are errors on around the cup where it hasn't been recoloured properly.
    4. Short and sweet - Give the woman a slightly longer neck, she looks kinda odd.
    5. The wall is a bit plain for my liking, try adding another window, with maybe like a wooden staircase with a Habbo walking up it, or just another scene like in the other windows.
    6. Kinda weird bend on the elbow - Try making it less right-angled. Also, there is no handle or door****.
    7. The bonnet of the car is raised up too much in my opinion, and not long enough. Try making it longer and flatter.
    8. The inside of the car looks a bit odd. I'm not really sure how you could improve it, try experimenting.
    9. Randomly standing Habbo, maybe he could be doing something?

    Again, please remember that I'm not having a go at the alt, I love it, and I'd love to see it improve. These are just my suggestions, and I hope you take them into consideration when/if improving the alt (as this took me about 15 minutes to type out ). +Rep for the obvious hard work you have put into this alt.
    Last edited by scubadiva; 04-11-2006 at 05:43 PM.

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    Thanks! I really like constructive critism. I'll work on what you've indicated.

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    If you need a hand, I'm just a PM away

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    Nice work! 9/10, do what scuba said + Rep!
    what is fetch gretchen?

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    Quote Originally Posted by scubadiva View Post
    If you need a hand, I'm just a PM away
    Ok will do.

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