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    This is a live Preview:
    http://primaldesigns.co.uk/117-LIVE%20PREVIEW/

    This means its an image on the background.

    I just put the text on there as if it was Primal Designs, although its for a completly different site.

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    I really love that i don't have any improvements well maybe change font in the banner thing!
    Last edited by RNelson; 21-10-2006 at 12:15 PM.

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    That is a very good design Joe.

    Just one point.

    I don't like the copyright at the bottom due to the colour and how it looks cluttered with the links underneath it

    Apart from that it is a very nice design and it is also very acesssible.


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    Thanks - The Primal Designs font is awful, but the text I wanted to use is around £25 and I can't find a similar one.

    I was trying to fill the space with the logo and the image - And everything else. I had no other text to put there :S

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    Maybe try a nice clean 1 like amerika sans it's a nice font =]
    Quote Originally Posted by JoeComins View Post
    Thanks - The Primal Designs font is awful, but the text I wanted to use is around £25 and I can't find a similar one.

    I was trying to fill the space with the logo and the image - And everything else. I had no other text to put there :S

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    Hey.

    I really like that. Like the colours and design of it all. Can't think of anything wrong with it. But i really like it.


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    I think banner slightly bigger.

    And align the " about us, bit with " PRimal>About>designers> "

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    EDITED - Changed the font, and dropped the Content Header down 2px

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    Great but copyright sucks. Take it off.
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    I know you liked Constructive Criticism Joe so here is sone.

    The header is awesome as it is just a logo and not cluttered but I think it could intergrate within the layout a bit instead of just transparency within the background.

    You have gone for that mainstream navigation it seems where it is set as 100% width and I just don't like it, and the 100% width with that gradient makes it look awful on that background but thats just my opinion the a:hover on onMouseOver whichever you will use looks nice for the rollover.

    The content section looks out of place and I just don't know why, perhaps because there is a lack of text followed by a large image with a somewhat obtrusive border for that setting but some some re-designing and adding some design principles it could look brilliant, try some filter text before re-designing though.

    Everyone seems to have an issue with the copyright I think it's ok as it gives out the relevent information and intergrates within the layout very nicely, but you are missing a sitemap which isn't the best for SEO practices.

    Hope you improve it some more.

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