My first alt

[raverbaby4life]

This is my first alt most of this is just recolours

I no the floor is messed up but ill try harder next time ;]

So what do you think (Be gentle)

[Jam]

But Many Problems:

1. Some Black Lines Missing
2. Saved As Wrong File Type (Should Be .png)
3. Did U Ask Permission To Use Other Peoples Alts?

Good Points

1. The Table (If Its Yours) 8/10
[U]2. The Person Who Is Looking For Maths

[Mesh]

Urm why did you use petals on the floor? you copied and pasted them :S

[iDrops]

Sorry but I find those colours annoying. The petal patch doesnt look right. 5/10

[Joord]

I dislike it all. Sorry

[simon305]

you tight ****s lol, its a first dont be so harshh lolol anyway

6/10 for the stuff thats yours
1/10 if dou didnt ask permission to user people stuff

[dirrty]

For a first alt i think its alright. You can tell you have tried.

[Charlie]

The colours you used are too bright, and you need to add shading to your alteration. Also, the petals don't see right. But, apart from that, you can tell that you tried and what not, so about 5/10

Also, to the people who said "Did you get permission", they didn't say it was someone elses alteration, i'm guessing she screenie a room & coloured it in paint?

[redtom]

For some reason the table reminds me of the sims 1, and why have you quashed the petals?

[raverbaby4life]

Hi thanks for all the crit ;]

i know know to do better , the nerd is my own , the table is my own , i was tryin to make a bar sort of thing , but i didnt work out as i had planned , the pink cola is my own as well .

i didnt get around to asking to use the bubble gum , i just reoloured , i didnt know you had to ask for permission

sorry guys ;]