I need constructive criticism.

[RYANNNNN]

PM me, I have two layouts, the first then it is edited and the edited version is the second .. so yeah..

What one is better, why and stuff is what I need. PM me if you can provide constructive criticism.

[ebay]

well we need to see em dont we

[RYANNNNN]

I only want a select few seeing them, which is why I said PM me to see them.