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    Default A poem... :S

    Okay I wrote this when I dunno, I think I was about ten. I was quite proud of it then.

    I'm watching and waiting
    By the brick wall
    I see them coming
    And I hear them call

    I feel so weak
    They laugh in my ear
    They grab all my books
    I'm in terrible fear

    I have bruises and cuts
    All over my face
    I limp all the way home
    Though I am being chased

    They say nasty words
    They pull my hair
    I cry and cry
    It seems not fair

    That night I went to the bathroom
    I cried and cried
    I took an overdose of pills
    And that night I died
    Do you want Pie?

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    Umg thats well good and sad ;[
    jen&hev4eva

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    one of the best, +rep


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    wow, thats good
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    Thanks xx
    Do you want Pie?

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    It's good ;3

    Happy Holidays.

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    Meh. Stop making me cry you poop =[
    *Glares* Quit Glaring at me *Glares Harder* I'll Glare back! Yeah you go I'm not scared of you! *Glares* Tickles! ^_^ Your feet are on fire and you're giggling o.o They are? Yup. Who you talking to? Myself

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    Lol Megan.
    So do you like it?
    Do you want Pie?

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    I love your poems +rep (l)
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    Pretty coolio!!!1
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