The Magical Lido Caves: Part 1

[lil-rarez]

It was an avarage day for Tom. A walk around habbo strolling through the park. Looking at coloured pixels for hours on end. But there was one thing he loved doing on habbo, Swimming! He always nagged his mum for credits so he could dive! He raced back up the stairs to his room, and headed for the Lido. He scurried to the Diving line, avoiding every other habbo. He finally got to the line, 1st in the que waiting for his turn to reach for the blue pixelated sky. It was is turn, he was way above the lido looking down at the shiny and wavy water below. He began his run, picking up speed and then Jumping over the edge. He was decending at a fast rate, he began his dive. Pressing franitcly at the Keys bashing them as hard as possible. He was so out of control he accidently pressed the escape button. Flash, everything turned pitch black. Tom fell unconcious at his desk, as he came around he looked at his computer. His habbo was not at the lido no more, but in a very dark room. He could barely make out walls made of gold and encrusted with beautiful rubys and bright jems. Tom tried to reload but it wouldnt, nor would the power to the computer cease. He was trapped and his only way was to venture into the new dimension.....

[.:F:.]

Nicely written, but the plot is strange.