Natural Furni

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Couldn't think of a name so that will do for now. C+C Please and rate out of 10. You know the drill.

[Mado]

10/10 + rep!

I love that phone, and the plants are awesome!

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Thanks andrew, u were well quick to reply lol

[Browney]

I was impressed at this so i'll CC the hell out of it. I very rarely give CC as extensive as this but I can tell you put alot of effort into this so here goes:

- The plant is perfect, the pattern on the vase ruins it. The pattern is'nt parallel with the shade of the vase. Unless it's supposed to waver, then I take it back.
- The seats have too many black in lines. The wood effect just looks like scratches tbh. The shading on the seats is ok, but looks more like plastic than fabric.
- The rug is just flat. Too flat. It just looks like paint. There's no texture either. Look at Kaytii's medieval furniture. There's a perfect example of a rug with great texture.
- The table has little shading and no wood effect at all.
- The actual phone handset could use some shading.

That said and done;

A good quality alt and it's good to see someone putting effort into their work.

8/10 +Rep

Edit: Need to Spread.

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Lol ty, i acctualy looked at kaytii's rug. ty for that c+c, glad to see some people can say other things than thats good +rep. I'll edit it when i get time.

[GommeInc]

What is with no black lines in alts nowadays? Habbo uses black lines in its furniture? HC Sofa etc etc. Not having them makes them look un-Habboish and defeats the point of Habbo alts...

This was directed to anyone whos criticism is "Too many black lines." If they were trying to make realistic pixel art furniture, then maybe no black lines in areas, but that is not always the case, it varies on the sort of pixel art you are making. Habbo alts look like Habbo furniture and follow the same rules, therefore black lines are in pillows etc.

Anyway, enough counter criticisms

It's a nice alt. The vase needs a bit of work, the pattern is a bit untidy, it sort of dips down, then flat, then goes up again? The carpet is interesting, but I think in order to make it look like a fabric mat, it will need a few hairs draw in randomly. At the moment it looks like a rubber mat, which looks good, but not in this scene

The floor panels I think need to be worked on. I don't recall floor panels being just one length, but a multipe of panels to create one length of the room? Not really important, but it would seem more realistic.

I'm not sure what to say about the sofas to be honest. I wouldn't say they look solid, because the way you've shaded them and show where the light is makes it seem not too solid. I don't think it would look good detailed in a way as to make it look like fabric. I think they're ok as they are.

The phone need a bit of shading added to the ear piece, at the moment it appears in just one colour.

Last but not least, the end table on the left looks like it is missing something on top of. Maybe a news paper or some paper work? It would finish it off nicely and give it a homely effect.

8/10 overall, lovely work

[Browney]

What is with no black lines in alts nowadays? Habbo uses black lines in its furniture? HC Sofa etc etc. Not having them makes them look un-Habboish and defeats the point of Habbo alts...

This was directed to anyone whos criticism is "Too many black lines." If they were trying to make realistic pixel art furniture, then maybe no black lines in areas, but that is not always the case, it varies on the sort of pixel art you are making. Habbo alts look like Habbo furniture and follow the same rules, therefore black lines are in pillows etc.

The rules are,

Black lines seperate. As you can se in the Hc Sofa below. Eg pillows are seperated by black lines.

Shading shows edges/corners. As you can see in the sofa below. I highlighted some examples for you.

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Thanks gommeinc, i'll do some editing later

[Zuar]

i like it the way it is..
7/10
+REP

[X:RiX:X]

Ty =D, I like it but it needs to improve