MY CALL FOR HELP COMIC - DJ.Standish

[DJ.Standish]

This is my comic i made for last weeks topic.. Call for help.

All my friends liked it and thought it was good enough to win.. What do you thinks? x]



Ty
Edit: Sorry about the quality.. i had to change it to GIF

[Lozzoling]

I find the whole neon backgrounds garish, the non habbo text is bad and the term Newbie can be offensive. Your copy and paste jobs are horribly obvious aswell. Oh and the fake isometricness in the first picture is a bit...ew.
And the storyline is wrong, he traded it over, it was his choice to trade it whether doubling furni was an incentive or not.

Use habbo home backgrounds.

3/10

[Browney]

See above.

[DJ.Standish]

Rawrrrrr Thnx for the comments

[whiteman12]

Argh Too Bright. Eyes Dying...6/10

[Reinout--D]

I would say: save it properly first.

=.=

[Black_Apalachi]

I find the whole neon backgrounds garish, the non habbo text is bad and the term Newbie can be offensive. Your copy and paste jobs are horribly obvious aswell. Oh and the fake isometricness in the first picture is a bit...ew.
And the storyline is wrong, he traded it over, it was his choice to trade it whether doubling furni was an incentive or not.

Use habbo home backgrounds.

3/10

Read my mind.

[TrueColours]

Thanks i'm going to steal your idea and win mwhahahahah!

Joke's, dont post it as it can be stole -.-

[Jõnathan]

Oh god...
The format's boned up, the boxes are messed, and the background is too bright.
Oh, and the first panel looks bad too.

[Tristan]

All my friends liked it and thought it was good enough to win.. What do you thinks? x]

They thought wrong...
Effort seems not to be present here and it's just tacky...
You can see the edited call for help reply and is just generally bad...
Sorry...