Majectic Couch :)

[Sarah14259]

Here is my second alteration! Joy...

[myke]

Pretty simple but effective, nice!

Some pixel errors though

[letisix]

Yeh, Some Pixel errors But it is nice.

[TrueColours]

Get rid of the middle gold bar and the line across the chairs and it will be really good

[Sarah14259]

Yeah I am a pixel error so you can just expect what the rest of my stuff is going to look like...

[Typoh.]

some pixel errors 5/10 soz nice try!

[Sarah14259]

Like this?

[Bear-Max]

Right what you need to do is smooth everything out. Zoom right in on paint and make one majestic flow into the other - make all the lines straight, the shading consistent, etc. Below I've highlighted the problem areas for you. To me they're things you can easily fix and just seem to be a result of you rushing a bit.

[IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/64b96794b7.png[/IMG]

I was so bored I had a go myself.

[IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/4de51964e8.png[/IMG]

Hope this helps

[whiteman12]

Very Nice Bear Max. -.-

It's Alright Sarah But A Few Errors.

[Sarah14259]

Yeah thanks guys I am not the best pixel atrist you will see so yeah