Today i will make the most funiest poem and bestest i have ever made i will try as hard as i can so read here for it
Im on the computer typeing away
think of another day
when theres school
i feel drool
but when its saturday
i say cool
when its monday i usally say
thats not cool
usally in the hall
cry after 3:35
after i heard my gunie pig died
not long to walk
getting bullied
getting hit
wacked around the face and being called a nit
preying to god for it to stop :eusa_pray
but in the end im in the plot
people call me stuff and say go away
im so badly crying
on my own
in a house i was dared to do
took away and never seen too
cut up dead for good
its my mates who did it
i thought ill have a good life
lots of children
really dead
but a body in the ground
with my mum crying
brother wineing
of the day i died
at the age of 21
Lol did you like it eney of u add rep plz
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The poem add rep please BLOODKANE PRESENTATION READ HERE
Last edited by Butcher11; 24-04-2005 at 10:06 PM.
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:s i thought you said it was funny and the best :s
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dunno seemed good
when i said thts not cool
like it
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24-04-2005, 07:42 PM #4
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I Think you Should Really Stop Spamming the Forum With "Poems" They're not doing your Rep Much Good are they? :s
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HAH! Name someone who liked them and I dare anyone to say they aren't getting slightly bored/fed up with you spamming with your "poems." You are getting on my nerves but I am holding my temper. You have potential but put your feelings into them rather than useless rubbish and for the however many-eth time..... THEY DON'T HAVE TO RHYME!!!
An eye for an eye and the whole world goes blind!
To say you are part of the majority makes you one of the minority.
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It's funny because my 4 year old cousin writes better poems than him!
Originally Posted by Painiac
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LMAO! I'm sure your 4/yo cousin does!
An eye for an eye and the whole world goes blind!
To say you are part of the majority makes you one of the minority.
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It makes sense, more than Bloodkane's poems do... Originally Posted by My 4 year old cousin
Rate out of 10, Lmao! If she gets more than 6, I'll give her a sticker and say the internet loves her Lmao!
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Yeah you're right BloodKane I LOVE 'EM DO MORE PLEASE!!! Originally Posted by Bloodkanekiller
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