My summer room, c&c please

[iJoe]

Hey,

I started this room a long time ago and I think its finally finished

I think i have made a bit of a mistake putting the petals by the mats because it just seems weird ( i have now recycled the mats )

well anyway i am in need of c&c and i will +rep ALL constructive critism & commants



Thanks Joe

[Jamesy]

its good, if not slightly random in some places.

[iJoe]

ye, i kinda just put the yukkas down.... thanks for comment +rep of i like your sig aswell ukrane dance

[alex 1889]

Hey,

I started this room a long time ago and I think its finally finished

I think i have made a bit of a mistake putting the petals by the mats because it just seems weird ( i have now recycled the mats )

well anyway i am in need of c&c and i will +rep ALL constructive critism & commants



Thanks Joe

yellow icms not blue
the beach has holes in :p remove them
get rid of the yellow pillow and out a fan there.
sunset posters all over the far wall would look awesome imo
add a few more barrel stools next to the ones already there
yellow parsols only

7/10 seems like you were so desperate to post you forgot to add a few things :p

[iJoe]

thanks alot, i need loads of beach rubs and yellow parasols..... and another fan

hmm to the trade rooms lol, all my rares are in that room lol well most

[The Professor]

The gaps between the mats look poor. How many beaches do you know with puddles all over it?

I dont see why the solariums are there, if theyre meant to be the sun... they really dont look like it Maybe lots of solariums on top of each other would give a nice effect, but theyll just get switched off and you wont be able to switch it back on again, so it might be an idea not to bother

Spread the seating out, its all to one side

More posters

etc etc Nice try but not there yet

[le harry]

Lamps work well as suns!

[Mr.Sam]

stack loads of bball lamps they look like suns

[Nick-]

Why are there chairs in the ocean? :S
Most of the improvements have been covered, especially the gaps in the beach.
Perhaps you could section off the petal area as a beach hut or VIP area of some sort?

[Mr.Sam]

They are like inflatable chairs - like lilo's or w/e they are called

Why are there chairs in the ocean? :S
Most of the improvements have been covered, especially the gaps in the beach.
Perhaps you could section off the petal area as a beach hut or VIP area of some sort?