New Design - Rate Please.

[Mr.OSH]

Bonjour,

I've thought about everything I was told and this time I've created a cleaner layout which incorporates a better colour scheme, or at least I think so I'd like some feedback on it and as usual I'll + rep you if you post constructively. Oh and yes there isn't a watermark but as I always say, you wont gain anything from stealing layouts.

Thanks,

Jay.

[Flisker]

Nice, Line up the Content box with the header and i think it needs another colour aswell in there not sure what as its one of them layouts.

[QuickScriptz]

Pretty Nice!

I like the general look (background especially) except it needs something... maybe a different font for the content headers?

Anyways good work!

[YouFail]

There are aspects of this I like, but outweighed by the aspects I dislike.

I could write an essay on the good and bad points but I'll sum it up briefly.

¬ The grey lines in content boxes, honestly they look rubbish.
¬ The headers of the content boxes, don't stand out enough.
¬ The page background. Scanlines take away what little professionalism the layout has, why not try a solid colour with drop shadow on content box.
¬ The rounded corners. They don't suit this layout at all Jay.

Overall I don't think it is a great layout I am afraid.

Regards
Richard

[Mr.OSH]

There are aspects of this I like, but outweighed by the aspects I dislike.

I could write an essay on the good and bad points but I'll sum it up briefly.

¬ The grey lines in content boxes, honestly they look rubbish.
¬ The headers of the content boxes, don't stand out enough.
¬ The page background. Scanlines take away what little professionalism the layout has, why not try a solid colour with drop shadow on content box.
¬ The rounded corners. They don't suit this layout at all Jay.

Overall I don't think it is a great layout I am afraid.

Regards
Richard

Thats for pointing that out Richard, I will try designing it better next time and will take them points into account, I can see were you are coming from with some of them points, I'll try to improve it next time, I have not done many layouts like this before as most of mine were not aimed at being a clean look, I will try to think more carefully in the future when designing.

Thanks,

Jay.

[RYANNNNN]

Plain, try add some gradients some where.

Also, to center text in photoshop, click the text tool and you can create a box with it. Then align it centered.

[Mr.OSH]

Plain, try add some gradients some where.

Also, to center text in photoshop, click the text tool and you can create a box with it. Then align it centered.

Thanks for the ideas. + rep to all who replied.

[Bomb-Head]

Wow, I like it

I don't like the way the banner box at the top is offline with the other boxes though.

9/10, +rep !

[Mr.OSH]

Wow, I like it

I don't like the way the banner box at the top is offline with the other boxes though.

9/10, +rep !

Thanks for the comment, I'll think about alignment more carefully next time.

[bad-dj]

I like you have made a nice layout