A Memory- Poem

[R.Hashmi]

First of all, sorry that most of the rhymes are really "Me" sort of things.
I wasn't thinking properly, I did this in English btw, because on the day I was worried because I had to bring in a 10 page essay in the next day, or else I would get like, an hour detention or something. Plus I hadn't even started it, I guess he realised when I said "What homework?" Oh wel.. Another thing I was running out of time so I had to finish the poem in a rush.
So here it is then.

A Memory…

There was a creature of the night

And me, a normality of light

A romance with a bite

And the plotting of a plight

I stood in a shop so simply

Then I saw him looking at me

With green eyes twinkling darkly

Those of a blind, mist

With Jet black hair

Skin that’s pale yet still so fair

He steps towards me, with a care

It is true love, oh dear…

A shocking discovery

He is not the boy I’d thought he’d be

He has the potential to kill me

Yet he vows “I will never lay a finger on thee”

Plans to escape

Intercepted, he drops his cape

Takes up arms, defending me

He drops dead, how can this be???

The rest is history

Here I sit, with memories

But I’m not alone

There’s a little child with me

Looking at me

With green eyes, twinkling darkly

Those of a blind, mist

With jest black hair

Skin that pale, yet so fair

The child speaks “Mummy”

He’d left me,

A memory…

Can I get a rating or something? Tips are graciously welcome.

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