Criticise Please

[EtchyFairy]

Just what ive done so far, Wondering what can be improved before i continue?.

thanks.

[luce]

I think it is looking good atm but maybe pay more attention to detail

[EtchyFairy]

I think it is looking good atm but maybe pay more attention to detail

What detail is missing?

[EtchyFairy]

Ive noticed i put the right cross too far over to the left

Double post sorry.

Edited by Kaotix12 (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not double post, instead edit your previous post.

[EtchyFairy]

Question...

Is this forum not to get feedback on your alts?

Edited by ,Jess, (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not double post simply to bump your thread.

[Hiro]

Question...

Is this forum not to get feedback on your alts?

Yes, it is, but the graphics section is sometimes quite dead.
I do like the alt, I really can't see what there is to criticise from my perspective, I look forward to seeing the finished result.

[BlueTango]

I'm not sure why its called Habtopia? It doesnt look like a habbo utopia.

[EtchyFairy]

I'm not sure why its called Habtopia? It doesnt look like a habbo utopia.

Thats my habbo name

[-tad.]

Because paul smells :p


and it looks good maybe make the sides of the door symetrical ?

[PaintYourTarget]

Add detail and texture to the bricks, they look flat and 2D. Try putting shadows underneath bricks to begin with and move on from there.
The monster doesn't look real, it's like it's a plastic model placed in the bloody water. Try making it more fluid, perhaps submerging it's head a bit more to make it more sinister and lurky. Ripples on the water would work well too, borrow those from the Lido or something :p
The shadow is on the wrong side of the Giant Tampon.
I think the grass, water and path all need more detail and textures - look at Cptn.Kewl's work for good examples.

Looks promising.