Comic..

[Cherpi]

Didnt Win..

I think its ok..

Not my best work..

[zixin]

nice try make it longer are the writing small i can hardly read it =P

8/10

[Cherpi]

just remembered, i didnt enter it as it failed in sending

[Con]

Text is far too small. Download Volter-goldfish. That's the font used for Habbo

Overall, It looks like a good job, just the text needs to be readable.

[Kyle]

the text is unreadable

and after squinting to read the text, i dont understand the story

[Shcl]

I cant read it

[Cherpi]

where do i Download volter :S?

[Kocer]

That's well good I think!
Well done

[Powez]

I like it, make text a tad bigger, and the whole thing really, but otherwise its awesome XD

[Kyle]

I like it, make text a tad bigger, and the whole thing really, but otherwise its awesome XD

nice critisism polly parrot