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    Default My Hotel View

    I entered this in the January Comp. It was my first attempt of anything of this kind. I entered it on behalf of my other account "Ultimicia." becuase i thought habbo was biast toward me becuase of previous issues...(I was wrong ahah..) But anyway, she was a Runner up.

    Osrry for the fuzzyness.

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    Alot of the black lines are unnecessary, and some of the shaded lines are in the wrong places, also the design is very complex, and therefore, the water/pool/glass thing is meant to be slightly transparent so you can see whats behind it. Some texture is missing, you seem to use 3 colours for each side of the building, the patio could be done in a subtle creamy grey, and you could add texture. You should also save your images as .PNG from now on, clear quality = great reviews.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ChrisObv View Post
    Alot of the black lines are unnecessary, and some of the shaded lines are in the wrong places, also the design is very complex, and therefore, the water/pool/glass thing is meant to be slightly transparent so you can see whats behind it. Some texture is missing, you seem to use 3 colours for each side of the building, the patio could be done in a subtle creamy grey, and you could add texture. You should also save your images as .PNG from now on, clear quality = great reviews.

    6/10

    Agree with the "Glass block" being transparant. But be more subtle--or unless it was motive to **** someone off in 20 seconds.

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    good work!

    agree with comments above!

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    Quote Originally Posted by ChrisObv View Post
    Alot of the black lines are unnecessary, and some of the shaded lines are in the wrong places, also the design is very complex, and therefore, the water/pool/glass thing is meant to be slightly transparent so you can see whats behind it. Some texture is missing, you seem to use 3 colours for each side of the building, the patio could be done in a subtle creamy grey, and you could add texture. You should also save your images as .PNG from now on, clear quality = great reviews.

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    You could of just said; It's nice but needs quite a bit of work doing!

    I like it other then you saved as jpeg. It needs adding shading and there are a few errors

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    Oh thats niceee, agree with comments above though.

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    awful if you ask me

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    Sorry but that is quite awful and you honestly shouldn't have been a runner up. I would comment in detail but alot has been said and you should work on a bit at a time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cherpi View Post
    You could of just said; It's nice but needs quite a bit of work doing!

    I like it other then you saved as jpeg. It needs adding shading and there are a few errors

    No, the post originally wrote is a lot better since it offers detail and explaining. More specific help than just needs more work.

    The architecture isn't too great.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jennifuh View Post
    No, the post originally wrote is a lot better since it offers detail and explaining. More specific help than just needs more work.

    The architecture isn't too great.

    Disagree. He could have said it in a less ******-er way. It really is bad for morale.

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