My Hotel View

[NICJ]

I entered this in the January Comp. It was my first attempt of anything of this kind. I entered it on behalf of my other account "Ultimicia." becuase i thought habbo was biast toward me becuase of previous issues...(I was wrong ahah..) But anyway, she was a Runner up.

Osrry for the fuzzyness.

The Japanese Letters are my "trade mark" Ni and Ki

[ChrisObv]

Alot of the black lines are unnecessary, and some of the shaded lines are in the wrong places, also the design is very complex, and therefore, the water/pool/glass thing is meant to be slightly transparent so you can see whats behind it. Some texture is missing, you seem to use 3 colours for each side of the building, the patio could be done in a subtle creamy grey, and you could add texture. You should also save your images as .PNG from now on, clear quality = great reviews.

6/10

[NICJ]

Alot of the black lines are unnecessary, and some of the shaded lines are in the wrong places, also the design is very complex, and therefore, the water/pool/glass thing is meant to be slightly transparent so you can see whats behind it. Some texture is missing, you seem to use 3 colours for each side of the building, the patio could be done in a subtle creamy grey, and you could add texture. You should also save your images as .PNG from now on, clear quality = great reviews.

6/10

Agree with the "Glass block" being transparant. But be more subtle--or unless it was motive to **** someone off in 20 seconds.

[user130523]

good work!

agree with comments above!

[Cherpi]

Alot of the black lines are unnecessary, and some of the shaded lines are in the wrong places, also the design is very complex, and therefore, the water/pool/glass thing is meant to be slightly transparent so you can see whats behind it. Some texture is missing, you seem to use 3 colours for each side of the building, the patio could be done in a subtle creamy grey, and you could add texture. You should also save your images as .PNG from now on, clear quality = great reviews.

6/10

You could of just said; It's nice but needs quite a bit of work doing!

I like it other then you saved as jpeg. It needs adding shading and there are a few errors

[Pyroka]

Oh thats niceee, agree with comments above though.

[Kyle]

awful if you ask me

[dbgtz]

Sorry but that is quite awful and you honestly shouldn't have been a runner up. I would comment in detail but alot has been said and you should work on a bit at a time.

[jennifuh]

You could of just said; It's nice but needs quite a bit of work doing!

I like it other then you saved as jpeg. It needs adding shading and there are a few errors

No, the post originally wrote is a lot better since it offers detail and explaining. More specific help than just needs more work.

The architecture isn't too great.

[NICJ]

No, the post originally wrote is a lot better since it offers detail and explaining. More specific help than just needs more work.

The architecture isn't too great.

Disagree. He could have said it in a less ******-er way. It really is bad for morale.