Two of my poems.

[Jahova]

I write poems sometimes based on my feelings or sometimes regarding weird and wacky things (or even a mix of the two!). I have wrote many poems over the years, alot remain private but some I leave as notes on Facebook or on my blog. Here are my two most recent poems. Please rate, slate and C+C is greatly appreciated.

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# No Reply
# Written by Tom Spiteri
# From: http://tomspit.com

What? No reply, is that what I deserve?
I sent you a text. No reply that hurt.
In the last 5 minutes, you sent me a flirt.
And still no reply, not one single word.

I left a message on your answer machine.
“But I have 10 more”, oh yeah, that was me.
No one knows where you have been.
And still no reply, it’s a mystery.

Friends and family all have no clue.
I’m worried sick girl, what should I do?
It could be because I was being a fool.
And still no reply, babe this ‘aint cool.

And still no reply, the reason unknown.
And still no reply, no message on my phone.
And still no reply, are we frozen in time?
And still no reply, I want you as mine.


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# Fake love
# Written by Tom Spiteri
# From: http://tomspit.com

To avoid these events, there was nothing I could do.
You held control, the blame is on you.
You obviously didn’t feel in the same way.
In my deepest thought, had to call it a day.

I’ve felt the sorrow and have experienced the remorse.
Our enjoyable relationship, halted in its course.
Feelings of betrayal, I understand why.
You did the correct thing, you told no lie.

The selfishness of humanity was the main unsettling cause.
Mistakes could have been avoided; you should have taken a pause.
As no one can force you, life’s full of choices to make.
I suppose it’s difficult, like love, things may seem fake.

[Sunnily]

I love the second poem. In my opinion it works really well.

[Jahova]

Thank you. It was a bit awkward to make it look nice on the page, as for sounding correct, I'm still unsure.