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    I write poems about my life, mostly love (yeah, I know). I have many private and some public, here are a few. I've posted some for you before.

    # Talk to her
    # Written by Tom Spiteri
    # From: http://tomspit.com


    Just talk to her is what they all say,
    And yet I’ve been trying for nearly all day.


    Every single time it seems to go wrong,
    So I crawl into my shell and then write a song.


    I’m a person who lacks confidence,
    An emotional mute,
    Some say a loser,
    I refuse to dispute.


    She’s my passion, my love and she fires my flames,
    And everyone I tell seems to think it’s a game.


    I’m worried, I’m scared and I don’t know what to do,
    So I crawl into my shell and then write a song.


    It’s for you.
    # Dead Tone
    # Written by Tom Spiteri
    # From: http://tomspit.com

    No contact, more pain,
    It’s driving me insane,
    Like your playing some game,
    Will my love ever feel the same?

    Confidence is key,
    I want you to be with me,
    But still I cannot see,
    Will this love ever be?

    Tender love and care,
    And now she is not there,
    Speak to her I dare,
    Oh this love is just not fair.
    # Kenneth Robert Lamprey
    # Written by Thomas Spiteri.
    # http://tomspit.com/

    A part of the family,
    A piece of me,
    A carer, a lover,
    A father of three.

    A simple man of working class,
    Basic belongings with nothing too flash,
    Beliefs that guided through long, tough times,
    A real great grampy, I’m glad he is mine.

    Now this poem I give to you,
    My caring and loving grampy,
    Or better known to those around,
    As Kenneth Robert Lamprey.

    Rest in peace.
    Thanks for the read. I appreciate it.
    "RETIRED" FROM HABBO(X)

    :¬:

    TOMSPIT / COWLY05


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    I really liked them! They're really passionate, and I think the rhyming makes people realise how long you've thought about the words


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    Thanks, appreciate it.
    "RETIRED" FROM HABBO(X)

    :¬:

    TOMSPIT / COWLY05


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