Hotel For Paul <3 <3

[rokgal]

I just made this for Paul and its my second attempt but it also concludes my 1St + 2Nd and 3Rd version of my hotel so I hope Paul likes it and BTW I have only been done graphics since around end of June x x x

v1

v2

v3

[Mr-Trainor]

You've definately improved! I don't really like the chosen colors and the 'glitter' effect around it. Also, it seems maybe a bit too repetitive and the swimming pool could have something in it and around it But as I said, great improvement from v1!

[Matthew]

v1 = 1/10 lol
v2 = 6/10
v3 = 7/10
good design, just change the colours and add something to the pool

i dont like the spraypaint around it, but i guess the main thing is the building so i wont slate you for the grass (?)

anyway much improved, wd

[dbgtz]

colour scheme is awful as said, just use one colour and use shades of that. The windows should have some sort of shading to them, they're just a solid colour atm and quite a few errors in the lines such as the colour of the building going over it. Some sort of detail around the pool would be nice such as people, a fence around the building etc etc.

Oh also that spray can doesn't make the presentation better, it makes it worse (for future reference)

It's pretty good for your standard though so wd.

[Molly.22]

I prefer V1, i'm not sure why but I do. They are a bit plain and I am sure you could add to that.

[leer34$]

The colours look disgusting, maybe change them & add some other things like someone said~ pool.

+rep

[Qwertox]

Lol There Good!

[Gina]

I must say you've improved alot, next time try using different colours, but i love the second one
and btw pauls mine

[Tintinnabulate]

Third one is my favourite. Maybe add more detail to the pool. Well done.

[Samantha.]

The 2nd one is my favourite, although I do like the choice of colours in the 3rd one!