So Simple But im So Proud x

[rokgal]

Its Simple but im proud as I made this from scratch and it dont look too bad XoXoX

here it is! (might be small and it is a png) :

[Muct]

Ermmm... :/ 2/10?
There are a lot of dips in some of the lines, like one side of the 'grass' and the lower 'roof' and the walls seem to go shorter every side of the building! Where the wall should be placed on the grass it actually dips into it, on the side of the building.

[Gina]

i like it but a word of advice is to keep the lines to 2 bars

[dbgtz]

its not isometric or habbo styled, but it's not bad for someone of your standard, theres also some shading errors.

[Gina]

i agree

Edited by Ambzz. (Trialist Forum Moderator): Please do not post unconstructively, thanks

[rokgal]

i would try the 2 bar thing but im wanting it at a diagnol angel,

and muct is this what you mean?




Cos i done that to show a layer of grass behind it

[-EpicWin]

This is what is meant by 2 pixels.

instead of having it 2 pixel, 1 pixel, 3 pixel, etc.

[Muct]

Nope, I meant this:


Soz for the crap editing lolol but anyway... But the lines are un-even and are not, I dunno how to put this, may be wrong but; They're not, paralell?

[-EpicWin]

Revisited.
Try doing some recolor's instead for a while. Not much to be proud of, tbh.

[dbgtz]

Revisited.
Try doing some recolor's instead for a while. Not much to be proud of, tbh.

at least he doesnt pretend hes amazing, and it kinda is considering his skill level.
also i see errors in yours.