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    Default My armies advanced training grounds

    I created this the other day for my army. It's a training ground for advanced training.

    There are four trials with four different themes/terrains.

    Trial 1 - Forest mocha races
    Trial 2 - River rapids quiz
    Trial 3 - Desert obstical course
    Trial 4 - Haunted wired tug of war (sit on the black throne and say reset to reset)




    All feedback is appreciated, in how i can improve the room/what you like etc.
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    I think it looks really nice! I like how each area has a different theme . I don't like that there's only one of those pink plants near the entrance though, maybe add another in the same/different color? .

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    Thanks. Yeah i see what you mean with the pink plant, i'll buy a few more plants and maybe experiment around a bit.
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    Car une vision piétinante doucement
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    I like it but I agree with the flower thing above,
    I'd also get rid of the skulls and dead ducks in the desert section, and buy some of those rhino bones instead, but it's a nice room.
    ~ lol

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    Thanks , that's a great idea by the way i forgot all about rhino bones existing.

    +Rep to both you guys for your helpful suggestions
    Bonjour, la noirceur, mon vieil ami
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    Car une vision piétinante doucement
    A laissé ses graines lorsque je dormais
    Et la vision
    Qui était plantée dans mon cerveau
    Demeure toujours
    Parmi le son du silence


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    I like it, id make it so there is a rain infront of the mocha, not 3 infront & 1 space away

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    I agree with Luke on having each area having a theme, rather than having multiple rooms
    I'd just get rid of the blood duck in the Gothic section, doesn't look right.

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    mate ur done great room but its npa north pole army winter army so where is winter furni in here? I think need atleast put some winter stuff here

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    I really like it! Again brilliant idea with the different themes...I think I would name it training simulation though because with the door it looks more like a simulated training ground...however it is brilliant!

    I can't think of ways to improve other than stated so +rep!

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