
I think you need to use a better colour palette the colours are really keen and hurt your eyes a little bit.
However, they are ok, but work on your shading a bit as it's a bit of a big leap in shades in some parts.
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Yh i just realised when i looked at others
I agree with Sam, try and use a better colour palette, but the shading is quite good. Well done
Blue is best, The others are abit off but Good job![]()
Great jobEspecially since these are your first.
I particularly like the blue one, +Rep
Bonjour, la noirceur, mon vieil ami
Je suis venu te reparler
Car une vision piétinante doucement
A laissé ses graines lorsque je dormais
Et la vision
Qui était plantée dans mon cerveau
Demeure toujours
Parmi le son du silence
The green ones a bit of in colors but nice for yours first try![]()
I don't really like any the colours that you've used but the blue one was quite nice I suppose! Good work though![]()
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