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My grammar isn't great, but even I can see obvious flaws with this one. Also there's no need for two line breaks between the paragraphs.

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My grammar isn't great, but even I can see obvious flaws with this one. Also there's no need for two line breaks between the paragraphs.
Well look at you Mr. Recursion, Head of EnglishIt is a bit odd that there is a distinct lack of grammar. Did HotelUser write it in a hurry? I assume it was him as he's the one heavily supporting the petition. It does make the forum look a bit untidy too. I would be happy with bigger writing, and a bold link to the petition page as that draws in viewers. Writing a life story of Habbo is just going to put people off to be honest
Short and sweet.
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May I also question why Habbox is having an official petition for such a thing?![]()
It's nothing major, but I'm sure this will be corrected soon. I think David did the notice last night.
I think the petition is mainly because quite a few people care about the cause, and its something topical which has caused a bit of uproar on Habbo.
Personally I don't think it's going to do much, since I think Habbo won't be changing it anytime soon, however I guess it's good to see how much support the content team and David can gather on this- the advertising has certainly been good etc.
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I just think people need to get used to it.It's nothing major, but I'm sure this will be corrected soon. I think David did the notice last night.
I think the petition is mainly because quite a few people care about the cause, and its something topical which has caused a bit of uproar on Habbo.
Personally I don't think it's going to do much, since I think Habbo won't be changing it anytime soon, however I guess it's good to see how much support the content team and David can gather on this- the advertising has certainly been good etc.
The new font (Ariel, is it?) is far more modern in appearance, which is obviously Habbo's aim.