Double Decker Bus [WIP]

[.:Sindrolic:.]

Started this alt a long time ago, about three years ago. Modelled it around the London Double decker bus, but made it a bit habboish at the same time. There were a few problems with it, obviously the wheels and wheel arches. Here is WIP number 6 of 8, which I finished 3 years ago:



And here is the one ove been working on currently:


Rate/slate/appreciate, tell me what I need, other then the obvious hub cap and other wheel. Im going to add a bilboard sort of thing above the front window which displays where the bus is going. But anyways thanks

[Accipiter]

I dunno what you've done with the tyres it looks like an old ms spray paint tool

soften the edges a lot, if you are using old ms use sketch/skew to make an isometric circle (26 or something in one of the commands)

[:odey:]

The bus works really well, really nicely constructed in my opinion
I think the glass effect on the windows is getting there with the seats behind, but maybe a tiny bit more work, tint it slightly blue maybe if you want it to look more habbo'y, but definitely +rep, nice attempt

[Accipiter]

Ahhh I apologise I didn't read the text

You should use Paint.net for window transparency, aswell as adding light streaks to make it look like a window, shading on the bus is really soft

[Kasabian]

Front bumper needs a lot of work. Theres a pixel error at the top of the bumper, 3px instead of 2px. Also the curved bit of th lights looks horrid, defo needs sorting out.

Most the lines need sorting out, whether you go curved or straight you need to decide.

[Rainbow]

Good improvements so far, would love to see it finished off I'm sure it would look great

[.:Sindrolic:.]

Cheeeers for the feedback guys and thanks for the tips with the windows. Should probably make the seats more habboish too really, havent touched them in ages though but ill get around to that and thanks for the rep

[Valley]

Really like the bus, anyways: yes, tires could have a little more work. anyways gr8 job!

[Vernier]

As mentioned the tires need a bit more work but otherwise great work!

David.