MALE Bunny interrupted by Cat

[Meloneeze.]

First, feel free to post a comment on how it looks It only took me twenty or so minutes, and I used two, well, three, resources. The head, a little of the body, and the cat. Let me know what you think, and to be honest it looks okay to me :

also, yes, I notice the hands are a little messed up. I'm bad with hands. Some lines are a little too close, but it doesn't affect it much. First hand is screwed up. Bunny is a man. Okay, so what do you think?

[Nick]

The hands are alright but the outline around his body is to thick. Welldone

[Meloneeze.]

The hands are alright but the outline around his body is to thick. Welldone

Thanks! And I see that now, will work on it.

Edit: Fixed it:

hopefully line is a bit 'cleaner'

[Nick]

That looks a lot better

[Succubus]

This looks better then what it did before, but what's the odd bump near his leg? I also thing the shading is to heavy for the background colour, change it to a lighter tone. Over then that, well done

[Zelda]

Tbh shadow is too dark, and as Maria said the bulge is really weird, other than that I quite like it.

[NeverSkem]

I Like it!

[j0rd]

Also the shadow under both the bunny and dog is cut off.

[Jazz]

i like it, its amusing well done

[Ellz]

very good, the second version is much better but as people have mentioned, the bump on the hip area looks abit odd and the hand that is up too the face looks rather thin in comparison to the other one!

well done tho! +rep