Tick Tock - Ends 17th August

[the.games]

Time. Something that none of us can stop or control, and many of us believe is against us. This is something that I believe is quite depressing and that I think should be changed.

The following quote is a verse from a famous poem:

'Tick tock goes the clock
And all the years they fly
Tick tock and all too soon
You and I must die'

Your task is to re-write the above verse, leaving the theme of time passing but giving it a more pleasant tone.

The most uplifting, well thought out and interesting will win.

Prize: 5 credits + 10 rep

[Pampling]

'Tick tock we need the clock,
To bake this damn cream pie,
Tick tock I'ma stop,
to watch Me, Myself and I.'

Didn't really make sense, but hey **.

[monkey-anne]

' Tick Tock i need the clock,
To check habbox is running,
Tick tock let's stop
Red for the winning

didnt really rhyme

[tuanlong99]

Tick tock goes the damn clock
To wake up with a big big bop
Tick tock lets drink a can of pop
Need to get fanta next time

[Froggydoo]

Tick Tock the clock goes by
swirling in the sky
Tick tock it's so high
now lets eat pie

[Meanies]

Tick tock goes the clock,
drip drop goes the tap,
midnight begins to flock,
time for a little nap!

[Meloneeze.]

'Tick tock goes the clock
in big central square
Tick tock and all too soon
a flash mob is there'

I don't know if it's really happier or not, but whatever.

[freelancers]

Tick Tock goes the clock
Together we're on top
Tick tock and all too soon
For us I break the clock and time will stop

[PoisonedLies]

Tick tock the time is running,
by our weary eyes,
Tick tock our moments pass,
as together we despise these lies in fate.

[santa-my-nana]

Tick tock goes the clock
And all the years they fly
Tick tock and all too soon
You and I must die'

Tick tock on the clock
but the party flys across the sky
Tick tock on the clock
OH MY GOD THERES A FLY
*SQUISH* *SQUISH*