What do you think of my beyonce habbo song cover?

[CatFlaps]

So what I was trying to do was make a cover of a song and associate it with habbo, so I made a song called 'If I were VIP' based on Beyonce's song 'If I were a boy'
I know i don't hit the high notes very well so ill work on it so tell me what you think please x New cover coming out soon and I might make a music video for this one.

http://vocaroo.com/i/s10ecIEKE1bs


(SORRY IF THIS IS IN WRONG CATEGORY)

[Kyle]

it's HC now not VIP

so many pitch problems lol but I like the lyrics

[CatFlaps]

it's HC now not VIP

so many pitch problems lol but I like the lyrics

Um excuse me? It was the microphone not me my singing is perfect irl its the microphone or its your ears but not me im perfect

[steamyxo]

there already is a sng made called if i were hc i think?

[CatFlaps]

there already is a sng made called if i were hc i think?

This isn't if were hc this is If i were VIP jesus!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[sex]

i love it!!
and i remember you from my run seen you lots lol

[CatFlaps]

i love it!!
and i remember you from my run seen you lots lol

Thankyou so much for your positive feedback my true fans really are the ones that motivate me and yes your run is my life

[Hidden]

Nice try but you tried to squash too many words into a song that doesn't really allow it.

[CatFlaps]

Nice try but you tried to squash too many words into a song that doesn't really allow it.

No thats the point in it its supposed to sound like that so succeeded in achieving my goal so thankyou

[Yawn]

i h8 beyonce

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