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  1. #1
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    Default We belong together... ;o

    I am kinda addicted now! I have wrote another poem / article!!
    Please rate it. I wrote it while my internet was down last night!

    You belong with me.

    You don't feel it, but it's true.

    You left me a while ago.

    And i guess, i'm just falling appart.

    I hold my head in my hands, telling myself it's not true. I try so hard.

    It's running through my mind, over and over.

    Your gone, it's over.

    I can't change that at all. Although i might try, i guess it's just not going to work.

    I love you, you just can't see.

    That you mean, just this much to me.

    You don't feel it. It's obvious.

    But you say " i want to be freinds!"

    That's fine, we get on well.

    Your gone though. I can't imagine, I can't get this out of my head.

    The fact that, Your Gone. It's over.

    Some thing's are better left unsaid. This may have been one of them, but it need's to be of my chest.

    Maybe one day, you will return. Maybe my heart will just be left to burn.

    It's your choice, that i cannot change.

    So it's over, i'm telling it to myself. Over and over.

    Goodbye is the HARDEST word i will ever have to say to you.

    But i guess, now is just the time.

    Friends forever though, you see me as a friend. I see you as my whole world, my everything.

    The hardest thing you can ever do, is to watch someone you love, love someone else.

    all i care about is laura prepon & cats.

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    thts is lyk the sweetest thing i ever read!
    its just soooo true!

    Steph
    xx

    »-(¯`v´¯)-ĉhÊëśĚςāķe-(¯`v´¯)-»

    My French Teacher Calls me Stephy! Why? :s

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    omg steph i love yor sig hu made it.
    pmsl!

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    Quote Originally Posted by -=Ryuji=-
    omg steph i love yor sig hu made it.
    pmsl!
    lmao bex
    im sry i cant quite remember... :p

    Steph
    xx

    P.S I forgot to rate the poem! I give it 5
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    ... out of 5

    »-(¯`v´¯)-ĉhÊëśĚςāķe-(¯`v´¯)-»

    My French Teacher Calls me Stephy! Why? :s

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    ;'(

    So perfect

    ;'(

    Its making me cry

    ;'(

    1000000000/10


    You should be a writer
    Not a trialist

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    Awwww
    Touching
    REMOVED

    Edited by jesus (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not have text in your signature which is over size 4.

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    rofl. yes i am on trail as a writer yayay!
    all i care about is laura prepon & cats.

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    Well Good!

    Evil Mariah Carey!

    Copying The name of ur poem and making it a song!

    Evil ! Evil ! EVIL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    :p

    wait a sec i havent read it yet Lol once i saw we belong together i started singin it and i forgot too actually just look at the poem Lol

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    Not bad, but plenty of spelling and grammar mistakes there. But hey, nobody's perfect.

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    Bet You Get High Marks In English :p

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