City [WIP]

[Revis]

Erm, just posting to see if it's worth finishing or not, this is part of the bridge seeing as the whole thing won't load on imageshack...

And a building, loosely based on Canary Wharf.

[Scriptermone]

Dude, looking good

10/10 for building and bridge +rep XD

[Revis]

Yeah for once i'm actually liking the way the bridge came out, instead of using black I used 3 shades of red, and i'm actually proud of the shading on the supports in the water, even though it's not noticeable.

[pva-matt]

I think perhaps the red on the bridge is a bit bright.

[Tommy]

Erm i not a big fan, ill comment when its all done i suppose x]
Not a big fan at the mo.

[Revis]

Sorter imporved it, toned down the middle shade of red.

[Charizard.]

That great so far, Cant wait to see it finished. 8/10

[Mr.Kylee]

Um I like that ship second one. I don't think the bridge looks good, I mean the colours not the shape. I like the shape but red? ;s first ship needs alot more shading. The building..the glass just doesn't look like glass if you ask me. It just doesn't look right for some reason. You should make the background too :p but I won't give a rating till it's done.

[Roboevil]

It doesn't look right because there is no black outline, the red clashes with the grey behind it, can't you add an outline? (Preferabbly black ¬.¬.) What are those grey blobs below the bridge? They look like plasticine, you should do something about it, make them square...o.0??

[Revis]

Looking at a picture of the golden gate bridge gave me the red idea, I like the red as It stands out more against the green and grey. I might reshape the ship in the top left to make it simpler as I don't like it's shape. Background idea is good, I never thought of that.

I like the "plastercine blobs" and i'm probably keeping those. i've tryed putting a black outline on and it doesn't look good, so i'm not adding one.