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  1. #1
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    I still see your face,
    See that smile,
    Get ready to hug you.
    You're not there.

    Long to speak to you,
    Long to get close to you,
    Wish to see you again,
    Where are you?

    Stay awake at night,
    Seeing your face,
    Longing to touch it.
    You're not here.

    Seeing your face,
    Like an optical illusion,
    But you wern't there,
    And in my mind.
    You never will.
    MERRY CHRISTMAS!

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    Could be better... I don't like that second verse...

    Change it, you're better than that. :p

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