My English Story..

[Vause]

Heya All!
I spent alot of my time writing part of a story for my english GCSE.
There may be some spelling mistakes, but I will type it up for you!
It's about me, and my very close friend Jo (jovv ) as I love Jo very much
Be ready to reaaaaaaaaad!

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Here I am, on the floor. Half naked. I'm shaking inside, and i'm in a cold sweat.
I can hear her voice, screaming. I can hear her, shouting my name. It's like a broken record in my mind.
I'm griting my teeth, trying not to scream. I should have done something, called the police, anything. She was the best thing that ever happend to me. A friend. A sister. One night, I will never forget.. the night it ended. The she went, forever..


I woke up on the bus, i'm late. Again. I take a quick glance around the bus, it's empty. I can see the school in the distance, so I shout with what little voice I have,
"Stop, Please, Stop!" My voice croaking, I sound more like a frog.
As I drag my heavy feet, through the mud and the slush, I look ahead. I can see her. Jo. She is like my sister. She walks up to me, and hugs me. Her skin warm, like the raise of the sun. Just the feel of her skin on mine, lightens up my day. We walk slowly up to school. Just in time for the bell. I take off my cold, damp raincoat and sigh. Jo has alot of friends, she is like 'Miss Popular' at our school. Me, I just sit under a tree at break and dinner, alone. I feel like a fake, a ghoust. Invisible.

I sit down in the corner at my old, rust desk. Jo sits at the front, with her 'gang'. I open up my planner and begin to read, just like normal. As I read, a small peice of paper comes flying my way. With what strength I have, I open the paper, and being to read. I notice the handwrighting. It looks like Jo's.
The paper reads -
"Heya Em, want to sleep at mine tonight? It will be so much fun! Write back, Love Jo xx"
She often sends notes to ne, I keep them all in my planner. I decide to write back, so I pick up my bag off the floor, and take out a small blunt HB pencil from the bottom. I turn over the paper and begin to write..
"Heya sis, yes, of course I will sleep! I'll phone you later, love Emma xx"
My handwrighting is so messy, I can barely read it myself.

Later that day, I walk over to my tree, sit down and pull out of my bag a small ham sandwitch. As I begin to eat, I hear a small voice shouting my name. I knew it was Jo, her voice is so soft and gentle. She sits beside me, all the time she is smiliing. Her smile reminds me of a rainbow, so happy and calm.
"Heya Chuck!" She says, eating a packet of salt and vinegar crisps.
She begins to tallk about her plans for the sleepover, and how much fun we will have.
"Wow, this sounds soooo cool! I can't wait!" I reply with a smile, and a mouthful of ham.
She smiles and hugs me, then we continue to eat our lunch.

The bell goes, and I run home. My mum says it's fine if I sleep at Jo's, I jump with happyness and joy.
I run upstairs and get all my things ready. I ask mum nicely to use the phone, I dial Jo's number and wait...

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that's as far as I have got so far! Please tell me your thoughts and ideas!
Thanks All!

Emma

xx

[chipie60]

Its sooo Beautiful ;'[[
What 'appens? I must Know!
Great job emz

[Vause]

haha Ty jen, took me ages to type! 3

[chipie60]

*cries because relationship between jo and emz so bootyful*

[Vause]

roffl, i love to write hell yeah!

[Addie]

Aw comon! I loveeeeeee it! I need to know zee rest!

[Vause]

haha i'm working on it!

[Addie]

WOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOO! Lmao.. Im doing Chapter 3 of myne

[Rosie]

WOW How can you just write like that i would be sitting for about 3 days learning to spell first! Lmao Yeah i wanna know what happens that is soo cool !!!!!

[DJ-3000]

Aww lmao, it's nice. Love it as much as I love you my friend!