First alteration

[Adzeh]

the projector should be facing the other way.

[-=rooty987=-]

I remember my first alt. Just go onto www.impetuous.net and go to the free stuff and get alt outlines so you can just recolour and design without to much fuss. Sorry i can not give this a high mark. But i hope that you will improve. Things do not proceed over night. So everyone who consideers leaving mean comments please consider turning it into constuctive critism instead of hurtful comments.

Hope you do well.



Skibs

[Jasmin]

Lol Umm Its a Good idea A few Tips
1.) Maybe ya Can shade
2.)Make it a Different way its all Right and it should be left
3.) why is it on top of the Thingy [bad memory] It should be infront
4.) Make some Straight Lines
Ok Then Ya'll be good in No Time

[Kekea]

Thats scary.... haha funny too

1/10

[gregzilla]

2/10 i like ure effort but it just looks rubbish really
plus it can't be yor first alt as u have an avatar thats better than it,
maybe u got the from some one else so im not accusing u
also i like the big screen, is it the cinema? i like the habbo but he is too small
and the projecter nedds a lot of work
keep going.....