'The Little Girl' Scary Story :O

[allykin]

Hi im not good at english with writing storys so dont write anything rude plz.

Characters:

Mum, Dad, Chanel, Chanice , tim, jim, paramedics, investigator, police

Chanel-Mum dad im goin out with chanice cya
Mum- hey wait u have hwk
*door slams*
Dad- she never learns does she.
Chanel- *walks* -waits at park- gosh where is chanice
Chanice- hey chanel
chanel- Hey hunni
chanice- so what you wanna do
chanel- wanna go in that big forest over there
Chanice- Erm... aint that really spooky and big we could get lost?
Chanel- pfft
Chanice- fine!
*Chanice and chanel walk into the forest and have been walking for 10minz*
Chanice- lets go back this is boring
*The girls stop*
*branch snaps*
Chanice & chanel- WHAT WAS THAT
-wind whistles-
Chanice- *runs*
chanel- wait *runs after* CHANICE WHERE ARE YOU
-runs around forest-
CHANICE !
CHANICE !
CHANICE !
-goes round corner-
*looks under leaves*
OMG CHANICE
-finds blood all over her body-
IT'S ALL MY FAULT ALL MY FAULT
*gulps*
*runs*
-sees a body-
hello? who are you
It's Courtney, don't you remember your little sister we always had fun
now let's have fun, i killed chanice well because she's useless and she just wants you to herself
chanel- *gobsmacked* omg it's a dream all a dream
Courtney- No chanel it's not now lets go play.
chanel- no no nooo you killed chanice, it's a dream *hits head*
courtney- i thought we were best sisters
chanel- you kuh-killed my best friend we would never be best sisters!
courtney- but... but... were bsfl
chanel- not anymore courtz,
*runs out forest*
-heres whispers-
chanel- ahhhh go away leave me alone
courtney- weeee now isn't this fun
want to play barbie with me
chanel- no!
courtney- oh so u wanna die if you don't wanna play dolls
chanel- fine then
*chanel and courtney play with 4 dolls barbie, ken, tommy and shelley*
Chanel- *runs* -finds big tree- *hides behind*
Courtney- whispers to chanel behind her oh so you dont wana play
oh well
I guess....
*YOUR DEAD*
*chanel lies on the floor dead,
courtney puts chanel next to chanice.
*1 month later*
chanices n chanels mum and dad are still trying to find their daughter.
A couple of birdwatchers, are going into the forest and they walk past.
They look down and see 2 dead bodys
Jim-omg! isn't that chanice and chanel you know whats their names
Kaydi and katies daughter
Tim- oh my god yes it is, we better run back and tell the police and their parents, their gonna be devistated.
Soon later jim and tim are with the police and they tell their parents
They all go to the forest and the paramedic, wrapthe bodys up in foil and put them in the van
Kaydi and katie sit in the van crying and crying.
then the investigators that have been searching the girls bodys tell them
there was nothing they could do, as nothing on the girls bodys was a sign
of whom the murdera was.
*The 2 familys have been crying every day of every hour of every minuete of every second for the past year of the day their daughters died*

************************THE END*************************

I know the story is boring not scary and all but i tried my best to make a scary story so please dont write rude comments, just say how to improve
and rate me plz.:eusa_pray

[Addie]

Not scary, Freaky 10/10

[allykin]

hehe a freaky strange story lolsh x thnx for the reply and rep