War poem.

[Surname]

Hello dudes! Well, for English homework, we were given 7 questions and we had to write a poem based on war with these 7 questions as a guide.

Here are the seven questions:

1) Where are you standing?
2) What is the expression on your face?
3) What is going on behind you?
4) What is going on in front of you?
5) What are the last words you heard?
6) What are you thinking?
7) What happens next?

Anyway, I've nearly finished my poem but I need YOUR help with a title and the last line (I've gone with a rhyming theme, so try making it rhyme please :rolleyes. Rep added to anyone who comes up with anything good .

Here's what I have so far:

(Title?)

Waiting, motionless in this bleak trench, full of fear and tension
With a face showing only my horror and apprehension
Behind me, the world lays still, very calm, very silent
In front, the enemy lingers, as they know things are going to get violent
“Hold your fire!” the words still echoing in my ears
As I think of the horrors which lay ahead, and try to forget my fears
And then over we proceed, to battle our foe
(Ending line?)

Thank-you!

[ross]

Waiting, motionless in this bleak trench, full of fear and tension
With a face showing only my horror and apprehension
Behind me, the world lays still, very calm, very silent
In front, the enemy lingers, as they know things are going to get violent
“Hold your fire!” the words still echoing in my ears
As I think of the horrors which lay ahead, and try to forget my fears
And then over we proceed, to battle our foe
To fight for our country, to be hero's once and for all.

Sorry it's a bit, erm yeah. I'm not good at poems.