The Hacker Tracker : Full version

[timROGERS]

Gimme more...more!

[..::Tina::..]

That's so cool, now post the rest *hint hint*

[ash5768]

holy camoly thats good,. .................................................. .. cool

[Jacko2kn3]

I want more too! Come on Kardan!

[2hd.]

yh com on!

[Kardan]

Dionysus got to the swedish hotel. AiQ the hotel manager was crying in the corner. Ione had already struck.
"12 left" Jay said.
"This is just stupid" Dionysus said.
The hacker Tracker bleeped. It seemed that Ione was going to South America.
"There's no habbo hotels there!" Jay complained.
"Who says she's going to wreck another hotel. All hotel staff for all hotels must know about this now but if someone else comes and wrecks it they won't know about it but if Ione comes, they'll know what she's gonna do" Dionysus explained.
"Ok, So who is she gonig to get" Jay asked.
"I don't know we better get to a airport" Dionysus asked.

At the airport.

"I got it! I know where she's going! I KNOW WHO SHE'S GOING TO TRY AND GET! I KNOW HER PLAN!" Dionysus shouted.
"If you be quiet i'll give you pie" Jay said.
"Pie... Ok i'll shut up" Dionysus said.
"First say who she's getting" Jay asked.
"Well she's going to Lima" Dionysus said.
"Lima? What country is Lima?" Jay asked.
"It's not a country it's a city" Dionysus said.
"Ok what country is Lima in" Jay asked.
"Peru" Dionysus whispered.
Jay gasped.
"Yep, She's after Jibbi" Dionysus said.
They got on to the next plane to Lima

8 hours later In Lima...

"Man it's hot" Dionysus said.
"Where the hell is Ione?" Jay asked.
"Don't ask me!" Dionysus asked.
The hacker tracker bleeped.
She's out of the city. She's in a nearby village.

In the near by village.

"There she is" Jay asked.
"Muwahahaha we found her!" Dionysus shouted.

Dionysus and Jay stayed behind a hut
Ione knocked on aother hut.
"Anyone home?" Ione asked.
Someone gasped.
"Ahh... You're home" Ione said.
"Re... Rebecca!" Jibbi shotued.
"Good to see you" Ione said. "Let's have a walk" Ione said.

They walked down a path.

"This is our chance" Dionysus said as he and Jay tip toed towards them.

"Listen... since habbo fired you" Ione said.
"They didn't fire me, I left" Jibbi said.
"Good... Listen..." Ione stopped.
"What?" Jibbi asked.
Ione turned around to see Dionysus and Jay listening to there conversation.
Dionysus gulped.
Ione pulled out a shotgun.
"REBECCA!" Jibbi shouted.
Ione pulled the trigger.
Dionysus got shot.
"Ha bullet proof armour" Dionysus shotued.
Ione shot the gun again.
"Bullet proof armour is good" Dionysus shouted
She pulled it again.
It got his arm.
"That's not bullet proof" Ione shouted.
Dionysus fell to the floor
"MARK!" Jay shouted
Ione aimed at Jay's head.


To be continued....

[Jacko2kn3]

KEEP GOING!

My PM didn't have much effect, hmmm, need a new tactic.

POST MORE!

[Kardan]

Mark was on the floor... Dying.
Ione pointed the gun at Jay's head.
Jibbi was speechless.
Ione pulled the trigger.
Jay blinked. She was still alive. Ione's gun had run out of bullets.
Jibbi spoke. "I'll call emergancy services".
Jibbi called the ambulance servive but then Ione grabbed Jibbi's arm and ran. She had took Jibbi hostage.
Jay waited for the emergancy services.
"Help..." Dionysus said. "Please..."
Jay started to cry. She couldn't do anyting. He was dying. She could do nothing.
The ambulance came and took care of Dionysus. Jay picked up of the hacker Tracker.

Location: Lima, Peru
Holder: Jay

The hacker tracker flashed. Version 3.0. The mail message bleeped.

Ahh, Jay, Good work, I have updated this to version 3.0 if anyone else gets hold of these there position will be put on here and they will be in control just like you are. Good luck.
Aapo in Finland.

Jay's position was green.

All Jay needed was Jibbi to touch it. Once. It would help. But Ione was running away. Jay couldn't stand this. She wiped her tears away and lef the scene. She knew Ione would go to the airport. So she did.

Jay found Jibbi. She ran over but they were getting on the flight.
"Ticket please" The aldy asked Jay.
"I haven't got one but i need to stop that lady!" Jay said as she ran onto the plane.

She was on the plane.
"JIBBEH!" She shouted.
Jibbi screamed.
"TAKE HOLD OF THIS!" Jay shouted.
Jibbi just touched the Hacker Tracker.
Her position was in lilac.
Jay got the hacker tracker but security threw her off.
In the end Sulake officials sorted the case and got her to Finland.

Jay explained, They knew who it all was. But all we needed to know was where the Dj decks are and how to rescue Jibbi.

[Mined]

Its good but you need to finish it instead of teasing us

[Kardan]

Don't worry final part is next....