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  1. 13-03-2005, 09:43 AM #1
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    Default umberella girl

    im really cheesed of as i couldnt find a boy base to sue with it so its not finished heres the girl

    any c+c? :p
    My heart beats like a drum (all night)
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    Theres something I know deep inside
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    It's ok 8/10
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    few errors 7.49/10


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    thanks if u could point out the errors that would be great aswell
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  5. 13-03-2005, 12:29 PM #5
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    wow its ok so ill give it a 7.6487/10
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