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    Default A great alt by Cheep.

    Do not rep me or anything for it, as im only posting it for him as he is banned.

    This is what he says,
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    I lost track of time, but i know i've been at it for over four hours straight. Ouch my eyeS. I present to you.. Habbovision Offices. Sorry for long loading time

    www.clubhabbo.net/vision



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    That's pretty good, could use some more shading on the roof I don't like the railings on the balconies either
    Last edited by scubadiva; 30-09-2006 at 04:39 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by scubadiva View Post
    That's pretty good, could use some more shading on the roof I don't like the railings on the balconies either
    Cheep Says: Why does it need shading on the roof, nothing is shadowd on there except the vents. Nothing else needs to be..

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    missing the shadow ;] and the red building is shaded wrong compared to the orange one

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    Lovely, apserloutly beautiful.

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    It's nice but the roof is too plain, try adding different shades and tones or build it up so that it's not flat. A sloping roof always looks better than one that could have been cut with a hedge trimmer!

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    Swap the red on the balcony side with the red on the HVTV side and it would look right and maybe do that on the smaller building on the left too except on the already darker red bit have the darker red come up halfway rather than all the way.

    But very good.

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    Where's the shadow of the building?
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    The balcony fences look quite messy.
    The building (Icluding the door arch at the front) should have the same shadow as the hotel.
    The palm trees need shadows.
    Tv statue needs a dhadow.
    As its a Tv station shouldnt it have well satelites and things on the roof?
    The 3 large yellow things need shadows as does the elevator and the HVTV text also needs to cast a shadow.
    You have really really ignored shadow on this piece and without it it seems quite basic.
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    Yea i got it :] still idk i should be happy.. But after i signed papers.... It was parked in enterence way and i didnt know if he cared if i went out it or went out the exit... So i reveresed it a little bit and "BUMPED" the front of a mustang... Neither car had damage it was accident :rolleyes: but idk i still just feel really odd about hitting it idk i like it but idk omg idk.....

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    Cheep with a dot told me to post his improved version:


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