My alts..

[xAlly]

On every forum I go on I post my alts, so if you've seen them before then it's cos I've posted them, I do NOT rip. They're not good enough for anyone to rip anyway lool!

done these when I'm bored

axl younger

axl recent


Ozzy osbourne


And I'm currently working on a big stage set type thing, full of guns n' roses. However I've only done axl lool, and I cba to do the other band members!

Pls rate, *removed*

micky.blue.eyes (forum mod): Please don't ask for rep.

[Dotals]

They're quiet good, but when the habbo is facing foward I find alts ugly.

I like the osbourne one. :]

I think the clothes need a teeny bit of shading!

Nice try, good luck improving your alts.


6/10

Also don't ask for rep pls, its not allowed, you'll get infractioned so quickly edit your post.

I'll rep you when I have 1 rep power, I'll put you in my sig now tho.

[xAlly]

I'm not asking for rep, as it's up to you whether you give obviously, I'm saying it's appreciated if anyone does! just a thanks in advance it won't let me edit my post so I can remove it anyway :/
and thanks lool, and zoom in or something, there's no more shading that can be done to it pretty much, well, to keep it looking habbo-ey.

[PaintYourTarget]

You could add a darker grey line to the inside of the light grey lines on Axl's jacket. Just stuff like that.
Go from the ISO view, more of a challenge but better results.

[xAlly]

I've never done it facing front to be easier, that just seems to be how I take the first screenie lool and I aint planning to redo it in iso view thx !!

and pls note.. I did these in 5 mins. I ain't an alt artist, I just do when I'm bored, as I'm sure you can tell!

[Dotals]

You could add a darker grey line to the inside of the light grey lines on Axl's jacket. Just stuff like that.
Go from the ISO view, more of a challenge but better results.

Yeah thats what I mean, it needs more detailed shading, maybe a bit of dithering where there arm meets the shirt so its a bit of shadow from where the light source is coming from.

(:

[PaintYourTarget]

So CC on these ones?
First one:
-Looks like a chick.
-Add a line of shading on the face, under the hair.
-Make the tatoo a lighter shade and move it one to our left, maybe add some more with different colours.
-Shading under the shorts.

Second:
-Hair looks a state, try and use the shading from an original Habbo hairstyle.
-Add shadows to the shirt, underneath the jacket.
-Change the buttons to a lighter shade, then add a shadow underneath.
-Add shadow to the skin, in the trouser holes.
-Add shadow to jeans, under the shirt.

Last:
-Add another shade to the chain.
-Add a lighter colour to the jacket.
-Put shadows/bags under his eyes.

[xAlly]

So CC on these ones?
First one:
-Looks like a chick.
Some say Axl does.
-Add a line of shading on the face, under the hair.
Eh?
-Make the tatoo a lighter shade and move it one to our left, maybe add some more with different colours.
Flipping heck, this aint a masterpiece.
-Shading under the shorts.
The shorts were exactly the same as they were on habbo? I havnt changed them at all!

Second:
-Hair looks a state, try and use the shading from an original Habbo hairstyle.
It is, LOL
-Add shadows to the shirt, underneath the jacket.
Yes, I should have done that. Cba to edit now Maybe later.
-Change the buttons to a lighter shade, then add a shadow underneath.
-Add shadow to the skin, in the trouser holes.
Yeah cos that'll make such a difference..
-Add shadow to jeans, under the shirt.

Last:
-Add another shade to the chain.
-Add a lighter colour to the jacket.
-Put shadows/bags under his eyes.
No trust me, it looks awful, I tried and I experimented, eyes looks best like that.

and got anything nice to say about it?
;/
I mean, if you're gonna criticise it that much you might at least want to find 1 thing good about it.

[Dotals]

Calm down, hes giving you hard cc so you can make it better!

:/

[PaintYourTarget]

I'm giving Constructive Criticism, it's what I received and if you can't take it, you'll be quickly disliked.
The fact you can't read simple sentances and dismissing the effort I put into helping you improve has already put you on my list of people I'll just critisize in a blunt and rude manor/manner.
(I'm really paranoid about spelling, punctuation and grammer/grammar now =|.)

The mic stand also lacks a light source, it is the same colour all over.



Details make a difference.