give ur opinion of these

[klwtwizzy]

:werock:

cud ppl plz rate my songs and tell me wot they think
its called at the weekend
5 days a week im workin hard
its not that i have too
studying,revising, and testing
all of these years it seems pointless
but theres only one thing im lookin forward too

and its...........
at the weekend baby
when im free and happy
no one disturbs me, im left well alone !

so at the weekend............
no more teachers or no lectures
telling me what to do
coz its the weekend

only comes once a week, help me!
2 days aint enough for me, too short !
after weekend goes, week routine starts all over
wish it was all the time
but itll never come true

and its................
at the weekend darling
when joy always fills my heart
then the week makes me moody gloomy!

so at the weekend...........
do what i wanted to do!
go out with friends
partying all night

thats what you do at the weekend
you go out and have fun times!

will i ever escape this.............
trapped up live?!?

5 days im workin hard
its not that i have too
studying,revising, and testing
all of these years, who knows it may help
but theres only one thing im lookin forward too

at the weekend baby
when im free and happy
no one disturbs me, im left well alone !

at the weekend darling
when joy always fills my heart
then the week makes me moody gloomy!

this is my story of life..............!
plz pm me im so new

[klwtwizzy]

:werock:


here is my second song now
cant wait till im 17
cant wait till im seventeen
its that time of year to party now
cos the djs rappin
and i know whats comin my way!

mum and dad have bought me my first car
hope i past my test or i will fall
do you know what this means to me?
then let me tell you what it is.............!

17 is the age everyone waits for in their life
driving,driving and more driving !
escaping whenever i want to
freedom lies ahead of me
never let it outta my grasp

soon im gonna move away
in a flat, where ill live by myself
no one to tell me what to do
only a year till i can drink

17 is the age everyone waits for in their life
driving,driving and more driving !
escaping whenever i want to
freedom lies ahead of me
never let it outta my grasp

get a job and work my butt off
just to pay the rent and bills
throw a party when it suits me
does this seem fun to you?

so life may go on
ill age by the year, older and older
until i escape this age,maybe ill be free?
until it comes ill have to sit and wait

17 is the age everyone waits for in their life!
so get a grip while its there,theres only only one chance...........

TO BE SEVENTEEN!!!!
so wot do u think?

[the wombats]

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