It quite good, it has potential.
Main points:
Try making things irregular, age some objects perhaps?
Add shadow under the cabinets.

Thanks guys, all points taken, and the sink, is modelled after the sink in my house and its supposed to be graphite, but yea Ill make it metal looking if it'll get the ratings up, ILl add shadows under the cupboards, and Ill get a proper shadow for my habbo... Im trying to make a coffee machine, or a blender to go on the side too...
Try using a lighter brown on the top of the cupboard, to show where there sepearted. cos it looks like one big cupboard
and maybe put one of the border things around the tops of the cupboards?
only an idea - 9/10 very nice
ps. the corner cupboard looks abit wierd
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Ive mended it abit for you..
papershop xx
Last edited by Papershop; 10-11-2006 at 02:46 PM.
*I don't get why 2 of the black lines..on top of the cupboards are black? I think they should be the light colour so it doesnt look weird and stand out.
*I think the backsplash should be difference so the floor and the blacksplash has a contrast.
*Light source on the cupboard facing forward isn't right. It shout be dark, medium, light.
*The microwave seems overpowering, meaning too big. And the pot is too overshaded.
*And finally, add some style to the room. Try putting a mom or just a person cooking over the cooktop. And try putting a tile pattern on the floor.
Last edited by .Lynn; 10-11-2006 at 10:21 PM.
Ive sorted out the cupboard facing this way, with the black line, and made it a medium shade... Im not gonna change the tiles on the floor or the walls, or put anyone else in it... Ive moved and made the microwave smaller, and re-done the cooker completely with no pot... Im trying to make a food mixer or something to go on the side, and then Ill post it...
The front cupboard ruins it a bit but its still amazing 9.5/10
Maybe instead of the cupboards facing you they could follow the other cupboards and meet at an angle
like the bottom set of cupboards under microwave
Last edited by Danny,; 12-11-2006 at 12:30 AM.
to many black lines, only use black lines on the borders of things, and a highlight/darker version on the edges.
-sam
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