My new poem its very funny read here rate out of 10 please read it im laughing lol!!!

[Bloodkanekiller]

When a sunday morning *Beats ryphem
is this the way to amarilo
ever night i been hugging my pillow
dreaming dreams of amarilo
sweet marie who waits for me


I cant stop singing
and cant stop going on the phone then ringing
and my gf has like gone minging
because i dont know how
she came up to me and i said wow
She had face lift
and then she got her case
and went off with her new bf like a race
but i couldnt go no where
she went to amarilow
and ive been weeping like a willow
and i never saw her again
and did i ever do no wrong
and then i lived in hong kong
and someone said "ICHA ULLA"
I went o yea i would like a yogurt called mulla

[Luayminator]

:S Another bloodkane performance, I dont seem to be a big fan, but tis a nice poem

[Drewar]

Grrr I never understand you When.. oh when will I get a brain?

[Painiac]

No offence, but these are starting to, nay have bored me to death. I appreciate your trying to get comments but at least spell properly and it isn't very funny. Poems don't have to rhyme, you know? You seem rather desperate to make it rhyme... "Icha Ulla"? :S

[Hanurr]

When a sunday morning *Beats ryphem
is this the way to amarilo
ever night i been hugging my pillow
dreaming dreams of amarilo
sweet marie who waits for me

That's a song, lol. I saw it on C4 (a NZ Music Channel) the other day. I'm not sure about the rest of it but it's a good one if it isn't, but I know the above bit's definitely a song. And they say I copy... o.o

[Evil]

lol its funny but i dont understand it