Another funny bloodkane POEM 2 SEE MY 2ND ONE OUT OF 10

[Bloodkanekiller]

Ive got a pet rat
who always sits on a mat
and my cat
chases after the rat
weird as it may sound
but it runs all a round
my mum goes mental
and my dad goes calm down dear its only a mouse
so i start freeking
because its a mouse
but a rat is more freeky then a little white mouse
because rats have tails with horrible aids
mouses are cute better then thoes ugly maids
i freeked
then i creeked
of a mouse
liveing in my house
but a rat
liveing on your mat
isnt that normal
but do you think im really formal

Edited by Butcher11 (Forum Moderator)- Moved from Anything not do with Habbo(x). Please post in correct forum.

[lauralol]

WOW I'VE BEEN WAITING ALL DAY FOR THIS ONE BLOODKANE! IT'S BRILLIANT! YOU'RE SO GOOD AT WRITING POEMS!

[Bloodkanekiller]

so wot do u rate
and add rep
or bad rep

[Seacat]

! OMG! Seriously you should sell them on e-bay! or maybe enter them for the newsie!

Hope we can expect another one tomorrow! wooooo :eusa_danc

[Painiac]

I don't.......... DHTR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (doesn't have to rhyme!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) god at least try to make sense.... 0.1/10

[Surname]

I might have to result to sarcasm in order to stop myself commenting seriously about your so called Poems.

[Fruitbox.]

:x... -Speechless-.....